I strut to the bar cool and bubbly. Feeling frothy and confident, I sit down next to a lovely lady in a sheer dress with curves in all the right places.
“Why, hello there,” I say, putting on my best smile. “I’m Bud Wieser.”
“Hi,” she purrs, her eyelashes fluttering swiftly. “I’m Bacardi.”
I’m in love. “Wanna dance?” I ask.
Before she can answer, I disappear down the hatch in three quick breaths. My heart is crushed until I see Bacardi’s smooth body sliding down behind me.
“Let’s dance,” she says, swirling around me in a tight embrace.
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So, the always amazing Troy convinced me to join in the Trifecta 99 celebration. We got to pick any word from the 99th page of the Oxford dictionary, and we could only use 99 words to tell the story. Here’s my 99.”
I’d love to hear your thoughts on my short short here. I always welcome and appreciate honest feedback. Feel free to share your thoughts in a comment.
Thanks for stopping in!
Hahaha! Perfectly twisted SAM! A love story that went straight for (or is that to?) the gut!
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LOL! Nice play on words!
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A great piece Sam. Loved ‘Bud Weiser’
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Thanks, Mike.
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Bud Weiser.. love that…
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Good. Thanks for reading!
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What a great anthropomorphic twist. Bottoms up! Thanks for being a part of our big 99th!
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it was a cool assignment and I’m just happy to have time to write again!
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yeah, I got a boner 😉 just kidding. Excellent play on words, and wonderful story. Want more.
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Thanks!
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What a terrific piece and though I don’t drink,I enjoyed the feel of this sexy dance thoroughly 🙂
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Thanks!
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🙂
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Ha! Giving a kinky new twist to the idea of cocktail hour! lol
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Lol. I didn’t even realize it was kinky. Ha. Good on me. 😉
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Loved this POV. I’m still grinning. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks for reading!
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*hahaha* I love the point of view! I was sure she’d have a date already – a tall, dark, effervescent sort of guy… 🙂
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Nope, she’s more of a beer lover as it turns out. 😉
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Well that was worth all the words, i love when you find the sexy,sensual place. I loved it of course, i love everything you write.
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Sexy, sensual…and here I thought it was just a little ditty about 2 drinks who met in a bar….;)
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your modesty is fooling NO ONE. 😉
TGIF!
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sext, strong, and I want 999 more words
oh, and hi…
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Hey, stranger! Nice to see you around here. And thanks.
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Nice. Can be a volatile pairing, those two. Interesting that we chose the same word.
Great minds and all… 🙂
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hahaha. Running over to check it out!
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