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Frequent Flyer Livery Service (Part 1)

He watched through the clear glass window of his private room in the center tower. It was the only room in his castle– a large, grey-brick structure with four turrets and the taller tower in the center–with such a large window. It was more than just a window, however. For Count Marcel, it was a two-way looking glass that allowed him to see any place, any time. Scientists later would call it a portal, though it really was not. This particular moment, he watched as a carriage moved swiftly down the dirt road in the woods beyond his home. His lofty position in the tower and the fact that the window ran around the entire room, gave him an eagle’s view of the surrounding territory. He usually knew a visitor was coming long before they arrived.

On this day, however, he was not expecting any guests, and the carriage on the road beyond was not heading his way. It was heading for his archenemy’s castle on the other side of the woods. The nostrils of his long beak-like nose curled as he whiffed the air.

Female, he thought.

His eyes stared into the scene in the window until it zoomed in on the carriage. The sunset struck so brilliantly into the traveling carriage when it gained the hilltop, that its occupant was steeped in crimson. The woman was quite lovely with her soft brunette hair pulled up into a large, sheer, pink hat. Her full bosom burst from her pale, pink frock. She held a small hand mirror in front of her face and smeared paint on her lips. Her beauty was lost on Count Marcel, however, as all he could see was the crimson flooding the carriage. He hurled himself through the window, his black cape winging out behind him as if he were flying. He swooped down into the carriage, scooped up the helpless female, and threw her in front of the carriage. The horses charged before the driver could stop them and trampled the woman to death, filling the path with a shade of crimson such as to rival the sunset.

He smiled from his perch in the tower, pleased with his work. He looked at the corkboard hanging on his wall, and flicked his index finger through the air. Ghostly fingers scratched a one on the white page tacked to the board, just above the number four. A noise from behind him caused him to turn and he observed yet another carriage worked its way slowly over the mountain behind him. He pulled a small vial filled with red liquid from his pants pocket and set it upright in a pan before redirecting his attention to the new carriage.

He tended to ignore the mountainside, mostly because those who traveled the mountain were too poor, their blood too tainted for his experiments. Something seemed odd about this particular passage though, and his hawk eyes trained to the carriage until it seemed to be in the room with him.

   Interesting place for a Prince! He thought as he recognized the carriage occupant. His eyes squinted slightly as the gears in his brain churned. Beyond the mountain was nothing but barren wasteland. Acting hastily before the carriage breached the bottom of the mountain, he jumped through the glass, his cape fanning out behind him, and free fell straight into the carriage.

“Wha…?” said the startled Prince as the Count landed smoothly in the seat across from him.

“Good morning, Sire,” Marcel said, making a slight bow from his waist. “I am amused that one such as you should be traveling this dark route. Have you no fear of the haunts that lurk these hills?”

The Prince trembled slightly in his seat. “None would dare face the King’s wrath,” he said unconvincingly. Marcel laughed, and laughed again as he watched the Prince shudder at its sound.

“Those who live in these hills fear nothing, least of all your King.” Marcel extended a hand out to the Prince. “I am Count Marcel. I own the Frequent Flyer Livery Service you should have engaged for your journey. I keep a vigilant eye from my castle there.” He pointed out the window as it came in view. “I am here solely to service good folks like you who have no business traveling alone through these parts. I have rerouted this drab excuse for wheels the city calls a carriage to my home where we will switch to one of my much finer ones for the duration of your journey. There is none in these hills who dare interfere with my riders. The risk is too great.”

As the last word rolled off Marcel’s tongue, the carriage approached the grey brick castle and a sharp whistle slipped from Marcel’s lips. The drawbridge came down. The carriage rolled over the drawbridge with enough speed to jostle the men inside.

“Whoa, that’s a rather rough ride,” the Prince said. The Count pointed out the window again at a group of wolves running behind the carriage. Only one of them was daring enough to try to jump the drawbridge and found itself sliced in half as the bridge closed on it.  A satisfied smile crept across the Count’s face as its blood splattered against the castle walls.

“There, see? Already I am protecting you.” He stepped out of the carriage and held the door open for the Prince, who stopped just outside the carriage.

“Where is your carriage?”

The Count whistled again and a horse came from around a corner. A man sat on a bench atop a carriage behind the horse. This carriage was indeed grander than the one the Prince had just emptied. The black paint was shiny and trimmed with gold. The black steed pulling it was young and frisky. Even the driver looked healthy and extravagant in a black suit.

“That will do quite nicely, actually, Count. What do you require in payment for your services?”

“Blood sacrifice,” the Count answered, a sick grin on his face. The Prince startled and cast a glance from the corner of his eye. The Count chuckled, a dry, sinister sound that did not relax the Prince even a little. The smile left Marcel’s face. “It is only a small vile. At least, you will live, unlike the others.”

The Prince’s head turned to take in his surroundings. For the first time he noticed where he was. It was a graveyard of sorts, though perhaps torture chamber described it better. The yard was full of black birds -vulture, crow, raven- all of which were feasting on decaying flesh hanging from gallows, dangling from stocks, and there was even one in an iron maiden. The stench hit him next and he gagged, bending over, which was all the Count needed to slit the Prince’s throat. He gathered a vial full and pushed the Prince out of the carriage before whistling the drawbridge down and letting the pack of wolves in.

They gathered around the Count like beloved pets, whining and scrambling over each other eagerly, hoping for a pat from the master’s hand.

“Well done, my puppies, well done.” He led them to the not-quite-dead Prince. They danced in anticipation, growls of delight leaving their throats. He eyed the Prince slowly, carefully. A full-mouthed grin crossed his face as terror froze on the Prince’s as the hungry wolves swarmed in.

Count Marcel watched from the tower as the wolves devoured their meal, a feeling of warm satisfaction filling his cold heart. Another ghostly finger left a scratch on the board as he set the vial in the box next to the first.

Two, he thought, and it is not even lunchtime!

The Count walked over to a corner of the room, the only part not encased in glass, and clapped. A panel in the wall slid open and he stepped into the darkness beyond. A light turned in the center of the room above a hospital bed. Shadows along the wall became clearer the closer he moved to the light. Medical equipment used to sustain life lurked there, the various wires running to and from the bed.

“Perhaps, my darling, I will finally have enough blood to give you a transfusion.” He stepped to the edge of the bed and pulled the sheet down. Fine white hair spilled across the pillow. Beneath the hair lay a shriveled face. Only its lips held youth. Marcel closed his eyes and kissed those lips as his hand reached up and stroked her hair.

He sighed deeply, the pain of his loss forcing it out. He did a quick check of her vitals. A frown creased his forehead. She was getting weaker. A volley of tears slid down his face. He could not stop crying and rage replaced his sadness. He threw the sheet over her face and stormed out of the room, the whisper of the wall panel filling the silence behind him.

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This story is inspired by many prompts. Frequent Flyer comes from Studio 30+ as one of the two writing prompts for last week. I used the 3 words from 3 Word Wednesday: helpless, trample, vigilant.

Storch-BadgeI also fit in the Master Class writing prompt as below:

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And last but not least, and although its about a 1,000 words over the suggested word count, I finally managed to use a prompt from Inspiration Monday: Can’t Stop Crying.

I missed the deadline and a new photo prompt is up, but last week’s Picture It and Write (posted in the story above) planted the seed for the story so I wanted to give the creator of the meme due credit. A new photo prompt goes live every Saturday or Sunday. You should check them out!

The second part is being written now, and you can expect to read it tomorrow.

I welcome and appreciate all honest feedback on my writing. Please share your thoughts in a comment.

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In Time: The Man in Black

The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed. If she squinted just so, she could still make out the black speck on the horizon. She urged her horse on, loosened the reins to let him run, and kept her eyes ahead. A storm brewed behind her and she knew that the man in black would disappear in it. She had to get to him first. Her future depended on it.

A shower of dust revealed she was gaining on him. She glanced behind her quickly to check the proximity of the storm. Pleased that it was still far enough away, she squeezed her thighs to her horse’s middle, never losing hold of the pistol in her hand. He took off, stretching his legs as wide as they would go before bringing them together in full gallop, unmindful of the sweat that slicked his brunette coat or the foam that decorated his white lips, though Viola took stock of it. He would need a long rest and gentle brushing for his service, and she intended to give it to him once she caught the man in black. She had to capture the magnet in his possession, the magnet that would allow her to manipulate time and take it all back– back to the woods with Cage. This time she would accept his proposal instead of running away. That was what caused it all to change and she had to change it back.

The man in black was the key. Implicated in the shooting of the Time Keeper, he snagged her pendant and stole Clockworks magnet. Now they were stuck in Clockworks, with the storm of the century brewing. The black speck on the horizon grew larger as her horse covered the distance smoothly. Within in minutes she could make out his figure. She smiled savagely and took aim. She allowed for the rhythm of the horse’s cadence before she fired.

Bang! Steam hissed from the back of the pistol. Viola watched as the man ahead of her moved. She knew her shot rang true when he slumped over. His horse slowed and stopped and she easily caught up. With her pistol aimed at the man in black’s head, she got off her horse and stepped closer to him, her trembling finger on the trigger. Silently, she let her eyes roam over the man in front of her. He seemed too slender to be Father Lee. She stepped closer, using the tip of her pistol to raise his hat up while remaining out of arms reach. She gasped when she saw his face.

It was Roderick.

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This piece is prompted by Sinistral Scribblings Master Class. This week, we are using the first line from Stephen King’s The Gunslinger. It fit with my Steampunk serial “In Time” so I let Viola take over from Brennan and Sienna for a moment. At this rate, I’m not going to win NaNo anyway, but I’m okay with that. I have a great story going, and I’m excited to see how it all turns out.

This post is also linked up to 3 Word Wednesday. The words this week are: cause, implicate, and stretch.

I always welcome constructive criticism. Please share your thoughts in a comment.

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Infidelity

Used with permission

He came home stinking of garlic and onions, and that’s when I knew. He’d been with her again, at that little Mama Mia café just off Judd Street in the center of town. He didn’t think I knew, but I did, and I knew who she was, too.

The little tramp.

As if he could hide the hooded eyes that took their time grazing over her body whenever she entered his office. He never looked at me like that, and I’m his wife! For better or worse, we said. Til death do us part, we agreed. Death-now that can be arranged, and who would blame me?

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This week’s #Friday Fictioneers is now hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Inspiration for this flash is the picture above.

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The Storm of the Century

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I hope the weatherman had enough sense to warn these people. I am coming through with a vengeance, and my best buddies are coming with me. This poor little town will be cleaning up behind me for days.

The electrical discharges I send left many trees on the ground or hovering precariously above unsuspecting travelers in their metal transports. The rumble in my belly they  feel all the way down to the ground itself, shakes them to their core. The icy baseballs I hurtle down on uncovered heads leave many wounded; leave dents in doors, on sidewalks, vehicles, and blue mailboxes.

The wind, though, is my pride. I really outdid myself with the huffing and puffing. Then, I challenged it to a race. What trees weren’t caught in lightning bowed over from the gale. The heaping buckets of rain I pour down add to their demise, and metal boxes attempt flooding roadways and the wind reaches out her hand and swipes them away. People climb to the roofs of their houses, calling for help, yet still I march on.

I aim to be the storm of the century, and I do my very best. I came; I saw; I conquered. Everything else is everybody else’s problem.

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For the Scriptic.org prompt exchange this week, Michael gave me this prompt: ​”I do the best I can. Everything else is everybody else’s problem.” -Alison Janney

I gave Carrie this prompt: It’s back-to-school time. You are reading over your child’s school supply list, and there, between the filler paper and three ring binder, was something quite unexpected. What was it?

I welcome your constructive criticism. Please leave your thoughts in a comment. Did I “show” enough or “tell” too much?

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The Intruder

Collecting youth. by alexstoddard on Flickr.

“You do not belong here,” she said, her voice warm yet menacing as it carried through the air.

Darien stopped walking and looked for the source of the voice. The trees seemed clustered together, as if to pin him in.

“You do not belong here,” she repeated. The trees shifted again, pressing closer together. Darien drew his machete, ready to cut his way through, if necessary, and stepped forward again. Unease crept up his spine but went ignored. A tree stopped his advance and a limb stretched towards him, its wood becoming flesh. Her arm was skinny and milky white. He recognized the markings that marred it. A finger crooked in front of his face, its sharp fingernail missing the underside of his chin by mere inches.

“You do not belong here!” she stated once more. He swung the machete back, but another tree stopped him from thrusting it into her bark. The pressure was tight and he released the machete. More twigs wrapped around him, trapping him in a tight embrace, as roots sprang from the soil, beating against his feet.

“You failed us!” her voice wavered as she spoke, the finger stretching further yet still avoiding contact. “You dare to return with the blood of our sisters on your soul. Your very substance is poison to us. You took from us our heart, now we will take yours!”

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This week’s Trifecta Writing Challenge: heart–3: personality, disposition <a cold heart> between 33 and 333 words.

The image used in the story above is the picture prompt from Ermilia’s Picture it & Write prompt this week.

And the 3 words of 3 Word Wednesday were beat, pressure, and substance. (well, they were the words until new ones went up this morning. *sigh*)

I welcome and appreciate constructive criticism. Please feel free to share your thoughts in a comment.

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