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The Elven Games 10

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Edgar sat up in his bed feeling disgruntled. Someone had shaken him and disappeared. He put his tunic on and found his way to the kitchen. Tribba was there hunched over a book with a pestle in her hand, sweat on her brow, pressed herbs in the mortar beside the book, and a small cauldron sat on the counter nearby. Strange aromas mingled in the air and created a heady scent similar to walking through a field of wildflowers. The smell was so strong it tasted bitter on Edgar’s tongue.

“What are you doing?” Edgar asked.

“Strange things have been afoot so I’m making you a protection elixir.” Tribba said, the words rolling off her tongue distractedly.

“You do all this yet you need me to champion you?” Edgar said. His voice held a twinge of accusation. Perhaps Edgar was having strange dreams, too.

“Yes. See this book?” Tribba picked it up and waved it in front of him. It was the same book they used to banish the werewolves. Edgar nodded. “If I didn’t have this book, I wouldn’t…no, I couldn’t…be doing this now. I am not a magical dwarf. Every spell I’ve tried to concoct from imagination has backfired drastically. Hence I married a greeter dwarf and became a greeter myself.”

Edgar’s eyes widened at Tribba’s revelation. Suddenly, it became clear how Tribba understood him so well. She, too, had been an embarrassment to her people. He walked around the kitchen and gathered both of her hands in his. When she turned to him, he looked straight into her eyes. “Until this moment, I haven’t understood why you chose me and why you had so much faith in me. Thank you for sharing that with me. I won’t dwell on the past anymore and will embrace this challenge with all of my being. If you can believe in me, so can I.” His chest puffed out as he finished. “I am your champion and I will win.”

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This piece was inspired by a myriad of prompts. I knew what direction I wanted to go in so when I saw the Write on Edge prompts for this week, I knew it was a perfect fit. The Write at the Merge word was “elixir” and the second prompt was the use your sense of smell.

Since this story is between 33 and 333 words, it meets the requirements of the Trifecta Writing Challenge this week as well with the word “dwell” in its third definition.

I was also pleasantly surprised to find that three of the words I used within the story were also the three words chosen for this week’s Three Word Wednesday. Those words are: backfire, embarrass, and taste.

Your honest thoughts are always welcome here. Please feel free to share them in a comment.

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Author: SAM

Author of fictions, SAM spends much of her free time living in alternate universes created by her own mind or others. When she's not writing, she mothers her 4 children, loves her husband, attends church, and neglects housework as often as possible.

38 thoughts on “The Elven Games 10

  1. It’s a pity one usually has to push someone away really hard before they get to revelations like this. But it is good that Edgar now knows, as he and Tribba now have a link beyond protector and protectee.

    Keep up the good work =)

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  3. You do a great job infusing your magical stories with real, human emotion. You feel a bit of a shift in their relationship here as well as seeing Tribba really working at her craft.
    ~Angela

  4. Even though I haven’t read the rest of the series, this was a very interesting read. It also helped to read the comment.

    What I liked about your writing is how you brought into this scene and even though I didn’t know much about the characters, you made me WANT to know them. I loved how you had Tribba hunched over a book — that’s a good visual and the rest of line maintained that opening image.

    I was surprised to read in the comments about who these characters actually are because I, too, imagined Tribba and Edgar very differently, but I like the way you are writing them much better. This sounds like a wonderful story:~)

  5. Wow! I really liked that! SciFi Fantasy Greeter Dwarf romance for Valentine’s Day!

  6. I love that Edgar is finally recognizing his own potential…but I think Tribba will play a bigger role than she imagined in the games

  7. So romantic! Just in time for Valentine’s Day, too.

    • lol. Tribba is an old dwarf and Edgar is a very young human traveler she’s convinced to champion her against the nasty elves in the castle next door.

  8. I am enjoying this but I need to go back and read. Great writing.

  9. Finally! We’ve reached the pivotal moment between Tribba and Edgar when they “click.” I’ve been waiting for this for awhile. Hopefully, you’ll get to the Games soon – can’t wait to see what that is going to be like.

  10. I can see I’ll need to catch up. I’ve read the first few, but have lagged behind. (I’m a bad person)
    Nice to see the two of them finding something to bond them. Well Done SAM!

  11. and i hope he wins — or not, whatever, if that’ll lead to a better story ^^ .. i rather like the bond that they share — that understanding of what the other has been through. excited to see what happens.
    p.s. i love how you managed to kill three prompts w/ one story – fabulous ^^

  12. I really love your series Sam. Can’t wait to see where it is going.

  13. So there’s a woman behind every successful male even in the Elven world? Very charming. :)

  14. I hope for Edgar’s sake that Tribba’s protection elixir works, considering that she’s a greeter dwarf! Can’t wait to read what happens next!

  15. A common thread is always a start to understand. Great job.

  16. A triple threat. Now I have to go and read some more of the story.

  17. i’m impressed with the deep sense of character development in such a short piece. i really love these guys, and i would like for edgar to first go back and get more fairy kisses ;) and then become the champion he was always meant to be…

  18. Nice that the two of them are starting to understand each other; seems like Edgar could use a little faith in himself and her for what he has in front of him!

    • Absolutely correct. I’m glad that the story is coming together. I have to confess that Tribba having to boost him up all the time was getting tiring, LOL.

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