Elizabella looked at the portrait behind the bar with longing. The lone ballet slipper with the single lace elbow-length glove and the strand of pearls dangling from the shoe created a feeling of nostalgia she wanted to forget but did not dare to. So much had happened that day, and she still did not know what to do or, most importantly, the answer to the questions that surfaced to her mind. Her mind refused to understand why she had not been there. No peace came from knowing she should have moved to New York but let selfish desires rule her decision instead. She wanted answers but had no clue how to find them. All that had nothing to do with the picture itself, but because of what the picture contained, it kept the questions burning. It reminded her of Mirielle, and, truth be told, connected her to her sister.
Mirielle, her twin sister.
They had shared almost everything growing up but passions. Mirielle was a diva, a prima ballerina since the first time she pointed her toes at the tender age of two. Elizabella was a bit more boyish, preferring rough, rugged sports like baseball to prancing around on a stage. The difference worked well for them. At least they did, until two years ago when the twins split for the first time. Mirielle went to New York, hopeful to find her destiny on a stage. Elizabella stayed back in their hometown in the Midwest, took classes at the local community college, and worked part time as a bartender for a local pub. They existed together, yet apart, secure in the knowledge that the other was out there. They had also promised to call each other at a certain time every night.
Until the night when the phone did not ring. No one answered on the other end either.
A second night passed without talking to Mirielle.
By the third night, Elizabella began panicking. Even when Mirielle was at her busiest, she always made time for her. A knot formed in her stomach. Dread filled her soul. Something happened, and it was not good. After five days of missed phone calls, her phone rang and she knew.
“Hello?” She said quietly.
“Is this Elizabella Sempling?” A masculine voice asked.
Trepidation filled her senses. “Yes, this is she.” She squinched her eyes shut and held her breath.
“My name is Dan Jones. I’m a detective with the New York police department. I am investigating a crime. You’re listed as the next of kin for a Mirielle Sempling. Is this correct? Do you know Mirielle Sempling?”
His voice held authority and she exhaled. Tears rushed over her eyelids as her breath escaped. “She…she is….my twin…sister.” She asked no questions, only wished to delay whatever this man had to say. A soft sob flowed from her throat.
“I’m sorry. I need you to come to New York and identify her body. How soon can you get here?”
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Grief stricken, Elizabella raced from the airport to the police station. Detective Jones met her at the reception desk and took her to the morgue. She said nothing along the way, still wishing to prolong the inevitable, and still holding out hope that the detective was wrong and it was not Mirielle lying on a cold slab in the morgue. She shivered thinking about it. The detective must have noticed it because he too remained quiet as they moved.
The elevator doors swished open with a creak as they landed on the basement level. The hallway beyond the elevator was not dark, but a few of the fluorescent lights overhead flickered as if they were about to lose power. This created an ominous atmosphere that left dark corners in every direction. Elizabella shivered again and pulled her wool coat closer, as if it was a suit of armor that could protect her. The detective placed his hand gently on her back between her shoulder blades protectively and she felt gratitude rush through her.
“I’m sorry. I know this is a bit…horror movie-ish, I suppose.” The detective chuckled softly and a slight smile found its way onto Elizabella’s face. There was no squelching the lump inside her bowels, however.
“It is a bit unsettling. This whole having to identify a body combined with this atmosphere…if someone were giving out trophies for the creepiest real life situations, I think this would win hands-down,” Elizabella said.
“I agree with you. It is very unsettling, even for me, and until the moment they are found, most of them are strangers to me. I’ve met some fascinating people along the way, but I’m always sorry for the circumstances we meet under.” The detective paused long enough to push open a set of double metal doors lined with black rubber strips. He held one of the doors open. “This way, please.”
Elizabella stepped through the doors and found herself surprised. The morgue did not look the way television had trained her to think it did. A woman in a white jacket sat behind a desk, a pair of eyeglasses holding back her golden brown hair like a headband and an out-of-place smile attached to her face.
“Hi, Dan.” She said, rising from her seat. Fondness dripped from her words. “What can I do for you today?”
The detective turned to Elizabella and said, “This is Dr. Johnson, our resident ME.”
He turned to Dr. Johnson in the same manner and said, “Susan, this is Elizabella Sempling. She is here to identify that body we brought in from the park yesterday.”
“Ah, yes. Such a pity, that one,” Dr. Johnson said as she turned her back to them.
She walked forward, her heels click clacking on the hard linoleum floor as she went. She crossed the room and stopped in front of a silver cabinet with a single row of three drawers. She opened the centermost drawer and slid out the tray. A body covered with a sheet laid on it. The doctor waited patiently for the detective and his guest to be ready. Elizabella sniffled and despair etched its signature in the lines of her green eyes and full mouth.
Dan turned to Elizabella expectantly. “Ready?” He asked.
Her eyes closed and she nodded. The sheet removal cast a soft breeze against her skin. She inhaled slowly and exhaled quickly, audibly. Her eyes opened slowly as she breathed. The tears she had been holding back spilled down her cheeks as she saw the familiar jawline, recognized the slightly crooked nose–the one she accidentally broke when they were five. Her face crumbled as she took in the various shades of purple that colored Mirielle’s skin, yet she held her poise. She closed her eyes again, willing the vision to go away, wishing that all this were nothing more than a dream. A wail filled the silence and she realized it came from her. She watched the doctor quickly cover Mirielle back up and slide her back into the black hole beyond her feet. Pressure on her arm made her feet move, but she was no longer aware. A fog settled over the edges of everything within view, and she allowed the detective to lead her away.
When the fog cleared, she found herself sitting in a chair next to a desk. A man she did not recognize sat behind the desk. She felt her body ripple and his head turned her way.
“Are you okay, Miss Sempling?” He said. His voice was as kind as his eyes.
Elizabella looked around her before answering. “Where is Detective Jones?”
“He got a call and had to step out. My name is Detective O’Hara. Can I get you anything?”
She looked at him blankly, soaking in his appearance. His black hair was peppered with silver streaks. Crow’s feet marred the corner of his soft brown eyes, chasing away the illusion of youth he had otherwise. Realizing her throat felt dry and raw, she asked for a drink. He came back with a bottle of water and set it down in front of her. Tears traced new paths down her face as she remembered why she was there in the first place.
“What happened to my sister?” She asked in a subdued voice.
Detective O’Hara paused for a moment. She could tell he was considering his words carefully. “Did Detective Jones tell you nothing?”
She let her eyes fall to the floor. “I…I don’t remember. I don’t even know how I got from the morgue to this desk.”
“I see. You must understand that I am not handling your sister’s case. I have limited information. All I can accurately tell you is that she died of an overdose.”
Elizabella frowned in confusion. “An overdose? That’s not possible. My sister was a dancer, preparing for her second show on Broadway. She would never use drugs.” Her fingers twisted around the bottle of water until it crackled. “She’s always been anti-stimulant. Pain was her friend, she said. It was the only way she knew she was doing it right. She would never, ever do drugs. Not even for recreation.”
“I’m sorry; I don’t have any more information. Since it is an active investigation, they must believe there was some foul play involved. I can assure you that all the detectives working on the case are doing everything they can to solve it.”
Detective Jones spoke from behind her. “We are absolutely doing everything we can. There is no evidence that she was doing drugs at all. All the marks and bruises on her skin tell a story. We need to figure out what that story is.” Sorrow framed his eyes. “I’m sorry again, Miss Sempling. Thank you for coming. I will call you when your sister’s body is released.”
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Elizabella looked at the picture behind the bar. The lone ballet slipper, the single lace glove, and the strand of pearls reminded her of her sister. Fresh tears slipped out, and her heart began aching anew. She looked at the glass in her hand. The bokah lights faded in the background as she raised it for a refill. The fingers of her other hand toyed with two small red capsules resting within her palm. It had taken her a couple of days to secure them. “Pain Killers” was the street name for them, and promises of numbness flowed behind every sale. She had wanted more, but they refused to sell more than two at a time. The rules were explained during purchase– do not mix with alcohol; do not take the open the capsules; do not take more than one at a time. The penalty for rule breaking could result in death. She understood.
She stopped toying with them and placed them on the white cocktail napkin beside her refilled glass of wine. She swatted at the tears wetting her face and looked at the picture once more before closing her eyes. Mirielle danced behind her closed eyelids, a smile on her unmarked face, and laughter spilled from her lips. They spun together in a circle, faster and faster until their hands slipped from each other’s grip and they fell, laughing, to the green carpet of grass beneath their feet.
“What are you waiting for?” Mirielle said, her face once again twelve, the best year of their lives. Childish laughter echoed between the trees that surrounded them.
Elizabella smiled. She opened one capsule and poured the contents into her glass. She could feel a lightness taking over her body, filling her soul with peace. She split the second capsule open and dumped its contents into the glass. She refused to let her thoughts wander, choosing, instead, to let Mirielle fill them. She sighed then drank from the glass, emptying it in four gulps.
As her eyes closed, Mirielle reached out to her. Hand-in-hand they started walking toward the edge of the tree line.
“Born hand in hand, died hand in hand.” She said with her last breath. “Maybe that’s the way it’s supposed to be.”
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I’m triple dipping this week, but only for two writing memes. I started this story last week when the first Picture It and Write was still up (the ballet slipper picture at the beginning of the story) and the new picture (the one at the bottom) given out yesterday gave me the story’s direction.
This is also a Master Class production, with the ending line being our prompt from Tiger Eyes by Judy Blume this week. You have until 6 pm EST tonight to get your story in. What are you waiting for?
I am always looking for honest feedback. Please share your thoughts on this, and any story, in the comments section.
Thanks for stopping in.


02/21/2013 at 5:55 am
Interesting.
Some editing needed: “do not take the open the capsules;”
02/21/2013 at 7:44 am
Thanks for catching that!
02/12/2013 at 3:22 pm
If I could have picked my own name, it would have been Mireille. ♥
I thought you did a good job with the story and putting the two prompts together. I liked the bond, and the anguish, and it seemed like she purposefully sought out the same drug that had killed Mireille, so identical twins? The people in the morgue, especially Jones, were freakishly creeper in the things they said to her. I was disappointed that didn’t turn out to be the plot, but it was a good mood-setter. Anyway, good job!
02/12/2013 at 3:34 pm
Thanks, Anne. I’m considering revisiting this piece and fleshing it out a bit so maybe I can add your twist in and still keep the ending the same.
02/12/2013 at 1:37 pm
i think the only issue that i have with the story as a whole is that when shorts jump around, which they kind of have to do for a story like this, you still need to be able to make the connection between the bits. this felt like i was missing something between the jumps. otherwise the storyline drew me right in, i would love for this to be fleshed out a little more so that i could understand her choice at the end.
02/12/2013 at 2:04 pm
Yeah, I am considering expanding it.
02/12/2013 at 9:26 am
Reblogged this on Kith and Kin : The Sisters Grinn.
02/12/2013 at 5:30 am
I wouldn’t have thought those two prompts could have been mixed. The story flowed on so well. I would’ve loved to have figured out what had happened to Mirielle. If she had overdosed, it is bitter-sweet and poetic that her sister would die the same way…but if it was foul play, then they don’t die the same way. You get what I mean? Regardless, loved your storytelling and this sentence in particular – ‘They spun together in a circle, faster and faster until their hands slipped from each other’s grip and they fell, laughing, to the green carpet of grass beneath their feet.’ Beautiful imagery. Thanks for contributing this week, Sam!
- Ermisenda
02/12/2013 at 9:06 am
Thank you for explaining why you needed closure. You gave me something to think about it how to “fix” it. Thanks for the inspiring pictures, too. I love your pinterest boards!
02/11/2013 at 10:20 pm
Good, as always. I have to agree with Carrie though. Even though I get the whole “twin thing,” as a reader I felt a kind of hole not knowing what happened to Mirielle.
02/11/2013 at 10:32 pm
Duly noted.
02/11/2013 at 7:30 pm
I suspected from the beginning that this story would not end well. My only suggestion is to not actually describe the images you’ve used int eh text, specifically the first one. I don’t think you need to give the detail about what is in the image, just impressions, Elizabella’s feelings regarding the image, perhaps a reference to her sister.
It would have been nice to get some closure, why was Mirielle “murdered” if in fact she was? And why would Elizabella decide to just kill herself instead of finding out what happened to the sister she loved?
You could definitely expand this before the ending suicide
02/11/2013 at 9:24 pm
She didn’t have the answers and twin love is extraordinary. She couldn’t face life without her sister. I might expand on it later at some point.
02/11/2013 at 7:29 pm
wow. This is so good. You have a gift for words.
02/11/2013 at 9:24 pm
That’s so sweet. Thanks, Deana.
02/11/2013 at 4:03 pm
I really enjoyed the noir-ish tone here. Nice!
02/11/2013 at 4:06 pm
Thank you, Bee. Welcome to the Class!
02/11/2013 at 3:52 pm
Another wonderfully authored piece of writing. Involving sisterly love this time. A long tale was told in much less words than it could have taken. Great work.
02/11/2013 at 4:04 pm
Thank you. I have really been trying to focus on tightening my writing, so I’m glad that it is evident here. Your support means the world to me.
02/11/2013 at 2:57 pm
oh. Wow Steph, I was afraid one of the detectives was a serial killer…but then the ending, hurt me even more. I think it’s because of the boys, I know that even though they are so different from one another and fight like cats, that they are connected in a way that transcends all that stuff. I know that if one was gone, the other would be lost.
the story was tight and well written, it was equal parts thriller and tradegy, the images you brought to us were vivid and the story you told was heartbreaking. I enjoyed and prayed for it never to happen at all.
great writing, as usual.
02/11/2013 at 3:48 pm
Thank you, Kir. XOXO
02/11/2013 at 12:10 pm
Nice mixing of the two prompts. Well done!
02/11/2013 at 12:18 pm
Thanks joe. Did I build it well enough or leave some things hanging?
02/11/2013 at 12:19 pm
Seems ok to me!!
02/11/2013 at 12:32 pm
Thanks, Joe!