Down through a rabbit hole she fell and was led on quite a chase.
From a disappearing smiling cat to a mad hatter, growing big and shrinking small, she almost lost her head.
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The weekend challenge was to rewrite our favorite stories in 33 words. I have many favorites, but Alice is the first to come to mind.
I welcome and appreciate feedback. Please feel free to leave your thoughts in a comment.
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06/25/2012 at 8:41 am
perfect last line
this was a classic retelling not summary. We saw Alice and those characters at Disney. AIW is totally different to adults than to children. I think Jefferson Airplane’s White Rabbit and acid trips. My kids see weird cartoon characters.
well done
06/25/2012 at 11:18 am
I really need to go to Disney one day. The newest Alice with Johnny Depp is what comes to my mind but its mosly how vivid and colorful Carroll’s imagination was that makes this my favoritte story.
06/25/2012 at 8:17 am
sooo good, such a great retelling of a childhood/adult favorite.
06/25/2012 at 11:18 am
Thanks, Kir!
06/25/2012 at 3:09 am
I felt myself zipped quickly along Alice’s journey. Tightly written 33. Thanks for linking up. Be sure to come back tomorrow for the special 33rd challenge. It’s going to be fun!
06/25/2012 at 3:39 am
Thanks!! This was rather fun!
06/25/2012 at 1:42 am
Yes, I liked the *bounciness* of this retelling – I think it reflects the technicolour feel of Carroll’s original…
06/25/2012 at 3:39 am
You flatter me. If only I had a tenth of Carroll’s imagination…thank you so much!!
06/24/2012 at 11:44 pm
I enjoyed the lightheartedness of your retelling. Nice response to the prompt!
06/25/2012 at 1:08 am
Thanks, Sandra.
06/24/2012 at 1:33 pm
Rhythmic and poetic. I enjoyed your response thoroughly.
06/24/2012 at 1:34 pm
Why thank you. It did come through somewhat poetically in my head.
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