Jabberwocky Love

This week’s challenge was SO MUCH FUN!!! I’ll share the challenge at the end. Enjoy!

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Like Alice through the loky gloo,

I watched her from afar

I wondered about the dimelo

Perched upon her chin

It was no easy task

To tear my aglenos away–

That dimelo with those rimps!

Oh! She was a dream come true.

The very way her pervocks moved

In a sontim all their own,

Made the very gimpet beneath my ferg

A quakety quimbeling mess.

Oh! If only she would come to me

With those great big aglenos

She’d lift the very gantz of me

All the way to my ignamoes.

We marched down the wigawoo

In our very best collutings

Just to hear the pretamor

Give neither veece nor roog.

He sent us on our merry way

With a pithy and a skrime

His last words left unheard

Her dimelo fell to the pribe.

The biggest igo you ever saw

Rested there just on her chin

It gaggled me with all its force–

A mighty hairy Foost!

For lack of wont to cut it off

And tarry my pretty lass

I shoved her mendit in the sand

Til she squirmed no more.

Like Alice through the loky gloo,

I watched her from afar

I wondered about the dimelo

Perched upon her chin

It was no easy task

To tear my aglenos away–

That dimelo with those rimps!

Oh! She was a dream come true.

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  This weeks Indie Ink Challenge came to me from Jason Hughes again (remember the sloth limerick?) and man was it fun!! His challenge was “Romantically Jabberwocky-ish”. I challenged Joe Sanders with “You are on your death bed. Your life is flashing before your eyes. One single memory is chosen to carry you into the afterlife. What is the memory?” You can find his response here by Thursday.

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12 thoughts on “Jabberwocky Love

  1. That was amazing! I would have been terrified at having to do that. You made it look so effortless and it flowed so well. It has left me with a big smile :D

  2. So much fun to read through. I love the way you made up new words and everything just bounces along so well.

    I won’t even bug you about being a keener and getting it done so soon ;)

    • Hahaha,. Time is not on my side. I have Irene barreling in my direction, with the threat of power outages, so I have to get these done. I’m working on my BMWW prompt today too.

      And you know, when it comes, you just have to go with it. ;)

  3. And this weeks challenge is off with a BANG!! I’ve read it through like five times now and I <3 it! I almost want to make a dictionary now with all these new words! FANTASTIC answer!!!

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